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Chapter 2 - The Woman Nobody Had Read Correctly

Claire returned the salute slowly.

There was no pride on her face. No victory. Only a tired restraint that made the moment feel heavier than celebration.

Cole’s jaw tightened.

“General, with respect, this is a competition line.”

Sterling did not look away from Claire.

“With respect, Sergeant Cole, you have no idea who you’re speaking to.”

The words cut through the range.

Cole glanced at the other shooters, searching for someone willing to share his confusion. Nobody moved. A general did not salute a random civilian competitor because she rang steel once in the desert.

Claire lowered her hand.

“Sir, I’d rather finish the course.”

“I imagine you would.”

His voice softened, but his eyes did not.

Cole laughed once, short and defensive.

“Come on. She made one lucky shot.”

The general turned then.

“One?”

The question made Cole’s confidence falter.

Sterling walked to the firing table, looked downrange, and spoke loudly enough for everyone to hear.

“Range control, confirm impact.”

A spotter near the monitors answered after several seconds.

“Center plate. First-round hit.”

“At what distance?”

“Eighteen hundred yards.”

The heat seemed to thicken.

Cole’s face hardened.

“With a service rifle?”

“With that rifle,” the spotter said.

The men behind him stopped looking amused and started looking at Claire’s hands. That was when they noticed what arrogance had missed: the small calluses along her trigger finger, the faint tremor she controlled by pressing one thumb against the other, the way she measured wind without touching a device.

She had not been nervous.

She had been waiting for them to stop performing.

Sterling stepped beside her.

“Bennett,” he said quietly, “why are you here?”

Claire looked toward the target line.

“Same reason as everyone else.”

“No,” he said. “Not the same.”

For the first time, something moved behind her eyes.

Memory.

Pain.

May you like

Maybe anger.

“I came to see whether I still could.”

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