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Chapter 5

I was not saying it to Davies, exactly. I was saying it to the situation. To the scope. To the rifle.

My finger tightened on the trigger.

The shot broke clean.

The recoil moved through my shoulder in the specific way that tells you the break was correct — no flinch, no push, the natural result of a compressed trigger meeting a chambered round at the end of a properly supported firing position. Through the scope, I watched the impact resolve.

The northern ridge went silent.

Not gradually. All at once. The machine-gun nest stopped firing with the completeness of something that has run out of the thing it needs to continue.

The valley held the silence for three seconds.

Then the fighters below, who had been moving up under the cover of that suppression fire, stopped moving.

You could hear them stopping. Or rather, you could hear the absence of them moving — the specific quality of silence that fills in when a coordinated assault has just lost the element it was built around.

Davies was looking at me.

His mouth was slightly open in the way mouths open when a person needs to say something and has not yet found which word to start with.

Reed, behind the concrete pillar with his hand on Miller's shoulder wound, was looking at me across the courtyard with an expression I had seen on faces before — not in this valley, but in other places, at other moments when the gap between what someone had assumed and what had actually been true was too wide to close quickly.

Miller's breathing was stabilizing. The wound was through the shoulder, manageable, not the kind that required the next ten minutes to go a specific way in order for the next ten minutes to mean anything. He would need a medevac but he had time for a medevac, which was a different situation than he had been in ninety seconds ago.

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I cleared the M2010 and set it on the bipod.

I stood up from behind the broken concrete slab.

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