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Chapter 7 - The Interrogation of Metal and Men

Lieutenant Harris didn't call for the military police. Not yet. A commander who instantly ceded control of his bay to external authorities without establishing the physical boundaries of the compromise was a commander who lost control of his line.

"Elena," Harris snapped, his voice crackling like dry cedar.

"Sir!" Elena took half a step forward, her spine snapping into vertical alignment.

"Seal the bay doors. Engage the hydraulic deadbolts. Nobody leaves workstation row. Nobody touches a tool, a bag, or their uniform pockets. If someone takes a step toward the latrines, you drop them. Understood?"

"Understood, sir." Elena didn't hesitate. She moved with rapid, purposeful strides toward the master security panel near the double-wide steel doors, her combat boots thudding against the concrete. With a heavy, industrial clunk, the magnetic latches engaged, followed by the hiss of the pneumatic seals locking the room into an acoustic and physical isolation chamber.

The room grew instantly hotter.

Harris stepped up to Olivia’s workstation, unrolling the full length of the green neoprene maintenance mat until it spanned the center of the steel bench. "Mitchell."

"Sir."

"Walk me through the metallurgy."

Olivia stepped forward. She didn't look like a recruit being interrogated; she looked like a lead investigator stepping up to an autopsy table. She extended her hand, pointing her finger at the extracted pin resting in Harris's open palm.

"Standard mil-spec extractor retaining pin," Olivia explained, her delivery clinically detached. "High-carbon steel, zinc-phosphate coating. It doesn't shear under normal operational cycles—it’s designed to flex under the recoil impulse of the carrier. Look at the perimeter scoring."

Harris tilted his hand under the direct beam of the overhead lamp.

"It’s not wear," Olivia continued, her eyes cold. "The score line is concentric, cut with a thirty-two-tpi diamond-edge needle file. You can see the chatter marks along the base of the groove where the tool slipped twice. Whoever cut this didn't do it in a vice—they held it in their fingers. There’s skin oil burned into the microscopic grooves."

She reached out with two fingers and picked up the bolt assembly from the table, rotating the extractor claw against its tiny coil spring.

"The elastomer insert inside the spring was notched with a straight razor. That reduces the extractor’s resistance by seventy percent. If I had dropped the bolt on a live high-pressure round during the second heat, the case would have expanded, the extractor would have failed to clear the rim, and the next round off the feed ramps would have driven its bullet directly into the primer of the stuck casing."

"Out-of-battery detonation," Harris finished the sentence, his jaw muscles clenching so hard that the skin over his temples pulled tight. "The aluminum receiver splits along the barrel extension threads. The shooter takes eighty thousand pounds per square inch of escaping gas through the charging handle channel directly into their orbital socket."

A collective, shuddering gasp rippled through the recruits.

Lance’s knees looked visibly weak. His eyes were wide, staring at the rifle as if it were a live grenade. "I... I swear to God, Lieutenant. I was trying to rattle her. I was just talking shit. I wanted her to fail the time—I didn't... I don't know anything about needle files! I don't even have my maintenance kit with me!"

"Shut up, Lance," Harris said without looking at him.

The lieutenant’s eyes were locked on Olivia. What terrified him more than the sabotage was the woman standing in front of him. A recruit does not identify thirty-two-tpi file chatter on a two-millimeter steel pin under fluorescent lighting. A recruit does not calculate out-of-battery gas dispersion pathways off the top of their head while standing at attention.

"You knew before you even opened the bolt," Harris said, his voice dropping low, challenging her. "You felt it on the forward assist. How?"

Olivia met his gaze directly. "The forward assist pawl was resting two-tenths of a millimeter too deep into the carrier notch. When the extractor pin is shaved, the bolt doesn't sit square against the barrel extension; it cocks slightly to the left. The bolt carrier doesn't lock into true battery. If you know the weapon, you feel the drag on the forward assist spring before you even touch the charging latch."

Harris stared at her. "And how many people currently serving on this installation know the weapon that well, recruit Mitchell?"

"Fewer than five, sir," Olivia said softly.

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The silence returned, heavier and far more dangerous than before.

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